Monday, January 10, 2011

Haiku #8

sunlight's last pink gleam
the splash of kayaks, the smell
of coming snow

Monday One Stop Poetry Form: Haiku


I couldn't stop thinking in haiku, so I posted another at my other blog:
Lizziviggi and the Life Worth Living
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8 comments:

  1. Kenia SantosJanuary 10, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    Lizzy, thanks for your kind comment on my Haiku! I don't think I can write it at all, but I insist in trying. =S

    Yours is simply lovely! Are you a photographer? Photographers definitely have an eyes for these poetical moments they capture with so much beauty. =)

    Take care and keep smiling.

    Kisses! =*

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  2. OldSchoolHaikuJanuary 10, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    Elegant

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    Loved the tactile take on this haiku. Great photograph!

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  4. moondustwriterJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    ooo I love your site - the photography takes me away.
    the haiku a perfect mesh with the photo

    Glad to have you at One Stop today

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  5. Maude LynnJanuary 10, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    I love that last line!

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  6. MagpieJanuary 10, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Very nicely done...great photo too.

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  7. Kodjo DeynooJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:29 AM

    Of coming snow, you always know when change is coming

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  8. Shashidhar SharmaJanuary 13, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    Its wonderful... Lizziviggi... and the images are perfect. I am glad that the Monday Poetry Form gave you food for thought... and now off to visit your other site, which I am sure will be delightful...


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